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 Zack the Rogue

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Zack Kaguya



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PostSubject: Zack the Rogue   Wed 27 Jan 2010, 3:38 am

Character Name: Zack Kaguya

Age: 21

Rank: Rogue

Desired Bloodline: *Unknown/Hidden*

Desired Element: Lightning

Village: Forest of Illusion

Appearance: Avatar

Character Personality:
Zack Kaguya, is a stuck up man that doesn't like anyone and will be an asshole to you unless he thinks you might be useful later on. He will respect his elders but only to an extent, if he actually becomes friends with you its rare.

Background Information:
Zack was born inbetween villages. When he was about 5 his parents left him in a tavern in a village. While Zack was sleeping his parents left not saying where they where headed. When Zack woke up he look all over the tavern, then walked up to a person he saw the day before sitting by the fireplace. He asks the man if he has seen his parents.In a slight hesitation the man replys in a calm tone saying he had seen them earlier that morning. Zack asked where they had went. The man had told Zack that he wasn't sure.

Zack started to cry and the man looked down feeling bad for the kid. He puts his hand on Zack's shoulder and looks down at him. He asks Zack to follow him, out of depression and anger Zack pushes the mans hand off and runs away. A few years later Zack is caught stealing from the academy in town. He is caught before he can get away with the scrolls he had. The man incharge of the academy is the same man Zack met a few years earlier. Out of sympathy for Zack, the man then offers Zack a choice; either he can stay at the academy and learn or he could be banished from the Village. Zack desides to stay at the academy. The teacher pushes him harder than the other students, but Zack seems to do as well as the other students in his class if not a little better.

A few months go by and Zack makes it to Genin. He was at the top of his class and was excelling faster than the other students. As he trained more and more he started to become cocky and started to slack off more, because of this Zack desides that traning was no longer needed. So then he desides that he would be better off if he just trained alone. He then desides to leave for about 3 days, at about noon on the 3rd day his sensei finds him sitting under a tree. His sensei begins to talk to him and asks him why he left, he begins to explain his problem to his sensei. His sensei asks if he would like him to be harder on him, Zack says yes and his sensei desides to take him back and give him one last chance.

His sensei starts to train him harder than he had trained anyone, a few years later his sensei desides that he is ready to take the Chuunin exam. The exam goes on for a few days, Zack makes it to the final round of the exam. The person he fights against is one of the best from the village hidden in the rain. Zack puts up a good fight but the guy he fights is far better than he is. The match goes on for about 20 minutes when it is finaly over Zack is laying on the ground with a broken arm. A few days later they desided who makes it past and can call themselves chuunin. Zack made it but just barely. Zack gets very mad at the fact that his training must stop because of his broken arm, his sensei takes him to a medic to see how bad his arm is. The medic tells him that he will never be able to train again. Right as the medic says that Zack grabs him by the front of his shirt and shoves him backwards causing the medic to slam against one of the walls.

The medic gets up and yells at Zack telling him to leave. As Zack leaves he grabs an arm wrap and pulls out a kuni and points it at the medic. His sensei appears behind him and grabs his arm and bends it behind his back and pulls the kuni to Zack's throat. Zack tells him to let go and jumps backwards slamming his sensei against the wall. His sensei turns him around and slams hims up against the wall. His sensei begins to talk to him trying to calm him down. As Shaki begins to calm down his sensei gets the kuni from his hand, they both walk out of the hospital. Zack and his sensei go into the woods and sit down on a few stumps. They begin to talk about Zack's anger. Zack mentions that it gets worse the older he gets, his sensei tells him he needs to train to take his mind off his anger. Zack tells him that training doesn't help. His sensei looks at him and asks him a very serious question. He then asks if Zack wants to become a Jounin.

Zack nods and looks at him in confusion, after asking why his sensei tells him that he thinks in a few weeks he would be ready. Zack nods and then begins his training again, about a year goes by and his training increases alot. His sensei walks over to him and tells him its time, they walk to the Kage's office and Zack waits outside. A few hours go by and his sensei opens the door and walks out, Shaki looks at the Kage and he nods. His sensei tells him congratulations and then Zack becomes a Jounin. At the age of 16 Zack had made it to Jounin....from that day on he has just been doing whatever he wanted.

Role Play Sample:
As the sun set slowly on this quiet day, Zack walked over to the edge of the bridge. The sun casted a shadow across the lake, his mind wondered as he looked down at his refletion. He began to think about his past choices and why everything had to turn out the way it did. As a tear runs down his face he notices a man walking down a path towards the bridge, he wipes the tear away and grabs the railing on the bridge. As he trys to regain his composure before the person made it the the bridge his has become pale, as the blood leaves his hands. He keeps thinking and becomes angry, as the person makes his way to the bridge, Zack quickly turns. The man walking becomes alert and Zack notices its a fellow shinobi, he quickly draws his katana and grasps it with both hands the tip of the blade pointing towards the shinobi. He notices the Shinobi is a missing shinobi he met when he was a child. His eyes fill with vengence as it is the same shinobi that trained him. His former sensei had become rouge after he had failed training Zack. He notices that his former sensei didn't recognize him.

"What do you want?! Why are you here?!"

His eyes glare towards the shinobi as he doesnt give him time to respond. Zack quickly sprints at his former sensei, his rage and hate grows as his vision became blurry because of the water collecting in his eyes. As he gets closer he jumps into the air and sheiths his sword and then reches into his pockets. As he pulls one of his hands out he is holding a kuni, he spins it in his hand and then throws it missing him purposly. He then drops to the ground and lands behind him, facing the village.

"So you still don't recognize me?"

He pauses as he listens to the wind pass past them both.

"I guess you wouldn't recognize your former student, after all as you said "You were my biggest mistake." I will never forget that and I will never let you live it down, if I let you live at all."

Zack then pulls out another kuni and throws it towards the back of his former sensei's head.


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PostSubject: Re: Zack the Rogue   Wed 27 Jan 2010, 11:34 pm

Interesting. I'll have to have another admin look at this though. I don't think we're allowing anymore Uchihas....<<
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PostSubject: Re: Zack the Rogue   Thu 28 Jan 2010, 2:50 am

Un
we accept no more uchihas
where is your picture?

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PostSubject: Re: Zack the Rogue   Fri 29 Jan 2010, 1:01 am

*Edited*

What missing rank can i be?
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PostSubject: Re: Zack the Rogue   Fri 29 Jan 2010, 2:40 am

Baaahh...i still say piss on that no more uchiha rule..XD as For the Missin nin rank...currently working on a way for Missin nins to rank up
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PostSubject: Re: Zack the Rogue   Fri 29 Jan 2010, 3:52 am

You can go blow a donkey if you dont like the rule. or we can go... like.... inquisition on your ass, Agi. ._.

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PostSubject: Re: Zack the Rogue   Fri 29 Jan 2010, 1:27 pm

Based on your jutsu list, yo can be missing rank b for now. Approved.
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